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How to Grow Credible Flesh and Blood Characters for Your Story


Some writers make the mistake of thinking that a brilliantly conceived plot will make up for poor characterisation. It won't. Readers want to read about people they can believe in. Here are some pointers on how to develop flesh and blood characters.

Of course, you need to have a clear picture of what your hero or heroine looks like, and you should be able to describe them physically and the type of clothes they wear. Also make sure you get their names right, and that their manner of speaking fits the person they are.

But what sort of person are they? How do you develop a profile of your characters so that they become real people to you? Here is a guideline of what you can do to 'grow' a character from scratch.

First, get a clear picture of what they look like and what they wear. Oddly enough this can change as you get to develop and know them better, but you need to start somewhere.

I suggest you take a note pad and use one page for each character. Put your character's name at the top of the page, then write a brief description of their appearance and clothing. This will give you a quick reference for the future.

Next, write down how you see them relating to people in a social class other than their own. Below are four types of people your character may encounter:

1. An addict - drugs, drink, food;

2. Service worker - hairdresser, clothes shop, high class boutique, car salesman

3. Professional - bank manager, accountant, stock broker;

4. Authority class - politician, policeman, judge.

Using one example from each group and describe an encounter between them and your character. Use dialogue. This is where you start getting to know your character and and find out who they really are.

You may make the mistake of thinking all this is a waste of time, and I sympathise with you. I know, you just want get on with it and start unfolding your plot, which is fine. But this is short sighted if you will forgive me saying so. Your reader wants to know, if only subconsciously, that to you, this person is a living breathing human being and if they do that will make your character real to the reader also.

The next exercise is to place your character in a stressful situation. Maybe they are in danger, or have a situation that presents them with a dilemma and they have to decide quickly what to do. Perhaps they suddenly have to take action to avoid disaster. How do they react both emotionally and physically?

Here are three scenarios:

1. Hero sees an accident and is the only person around to help;

2. Hero is surrounded by group of belligerent youths;

3. Hero is under pressure to spill the beans on crooked employer.

Describe what emotional reaction your character would have, what they would feel and what they would do to remedy the situation. Bring out your characters strengths and weaknesses in these scenarios. Write them down.

Finally, and this is important, your character must have some area of vulnerability or failing. This can be a personality or character flaw, or a physical failing in some area. Whatever else you do in developing your hero, don't make them perfect! Go back to the above exercises and see if you can introduce something that shows a failing or vulnerability in your character. This will make them human! None of us are perfect, so why should your hero be?

You may not have done this sort of in-depth study before, but please persevere. It will become easier the more you try. Keep working at it until you truly believe in your own creations and you will be well on your way to selling that story.


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Mervyn Love was born a century and a half ago (well, it feels like it sometimes) in the village of Reepham, Lincolnshire, UK and has never looked back. Mervyn failed his ‘O’ Level Maths at the age of 30, having been something of a slow learner, and ironically has earned his living by crunching numbers in the finance departments of several companies, including Enron and WorldCom. Which just goes to show that all the sweat and tears gaining ‘A’ Levels in Quantum Physics, Civil Engineering, and Cross-stitch in the 13th Century were a complete waste of time. Recreations include ropeless abseiling, desert pot-holing, lounging in front of the TV and tiddly-winks. The latter being a left-over from the time he captained the Frodingham Flyers to victory in the Lincolnshire and South Humberside Tiddly-winks Championships in 1954 against reigning champions the Appleby Aces. The Flyers won by two whizzers and a scrimp in a nail biting final at the Grimsby Fish Gutters Centennial Hall. His award-winning site for aspiring writers, WritersReign.co.uk (voted Best Cloned Site 2002 in the ‘Web Sites Thrown Together With Little Or No Thought’ category) recently won the "Site Most Likely To Be Ignored In The 21st Century" award, and has received several similar accolades. His ambition is to one day get out of bed before 11.00am, and beat his wife at Scrabble, but not both on the same day.

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