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Make Conflict the Backbone of Your Story


How do you keep the reader constantly agog throughout your story, desperate to know what happens next? It's simple. Use the technique that has been used since the beginning of story-telling: a good helping of conflict.

Conflict does not always imply physical disagreements leading to fisticuffs, although it certainly can be this. Writers like Dick Francis and Ian Fleming offer this kind of action in spades. But the writers often bring in other kinds of conflict which may be a little more cerebral.

Conflict can be conflict of purpose, conflict of ideologies, conflict in social standing and, of course, the inner conflict where the character is torn between two courses of action which they have to wrestle with and decide upon.

The most significant conflict is often placed towards the beginning of the story. This immediately captures your reader's attention as he avidly follows the hero working through the problem until he emerges into the light at the end of the dark and desperate tunnel.

If you are writing a novel there should be a series of problems or conflicts that the hero or heroine has to work through, thus keeping the reader on the edge of his seat eager to know how they are going to extricate themselves. For a short story you may want to limit the amount of conflict situations you introduce or you may bring your readers out in a sweat as they desperately struggle to understand what on earth is going on. In almost every case, for a short story less is more.

Introducing conflict is an excellent way of developing the people in your story. You can explore the inner depths, strengths and weaknesses they have and show how they react in various ways to the problems. In fact you can produce a conflict out of the attitude or flaws of one of your characters and then describe how he and your other characters deal with that.

It is true that most conflict situations involve differences between people, but it can be used in other ways. Perhaps your heroine is stranded in some deserted area which she has to find her way out of, or maybe your hero is adrift in a dinghy surrounded by sharks. How do they battle against all the odds and win through?

Don't be afraid to confront your characters with conflict after conflict. This will develop them as believable people and show the reader what they're made of. But have a heart. Give the poor things a little respite between each bout of problems so that both they and the reader can catch their breath before tackling the next one.


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Mervyn Love writes on several topics including creative writing. His website http://www.WritersReign.co.uk has a mind-boggling array of resources, articles and links to keep any writer happy for hours. Subscribe to the WritersReign Article Writing course here: http://www.writersreign.co.uk/WRac.html
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Mervyn Love was born a century and a half ago (well, it feels like it sometimes) in the village of Reepham, Lincolnshire, UK and has never looked back. Mervyn failed his ‘O’ Level Maths at the age of 30, having been something of a slow learner, and ironically has earned his living by crunching numbers in the finance departments of several companies, including Enron and WorldCom. Which just goes to show that all the sweat and tears gaining ‘A’ Levels in Quantum Physics, Civil Engineering, and Cross-stitch in the 13th Century were a complete waste of time. Recreations include ropeless abseiling, desert pot-holing, lounging in front of the TV and tiddly-winks. The latter being a left-over from the time he captained the Frodingham Flyers to victory in the Lincolnshire and South Humberside Tiddly-winks Championships in 1954 against reigning champions the Appleby Aces. The Flyers won by two whizzers and a scrimp in a nail biting final at the Grimsby Fish Gutters Centennial Hall. His award-winning site for aspiring writers, WritersReign.co.uk (voted Best Cloned Site 2002 in the ‘Web Sites Thrown Together With Little Or No Thought’ category) recently won the "Site Most Likely To Be Ignored In The 21st Century" award, and has received several similar accolades. His ambition is to one day get out of bed before 11.00am, and beat his wife at Scrabble, but not both on the same day.

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