Use the tools below to copy the article in plain text form, or you can copy it as HTML, ready to copy and paste directly into a web page.
HTML Which One Of These "Incidental" Yet Sales-Killing Mistakes Are You Making In Your Sales Co Which One Of These "Incidental" Yet Sales-Killing Mistakes Are You Making In Your Sales Co Author: Craig GarberToday I want to talk about something that was in our original mock ad that may seem incidental, but the way it was handled, is GUARANTE-ED to lower your response. You can check out that original ad, and even print out a copy of it, right here: http://www.kingofcopy.com/tips/real_estate_ad_071505.htm At the bottom of the ad, there was a sort of "disclosure" that said "This report is courtesy of Peter Butera, ReMax ACR. Not intended to solicit properties currently listed for sale. Copyright © 1997." First of all, if you can get away without having any kind of disclosure, than by all means, don't put one in. Sometimes though, the newspaper requires you to include them because they want to have "some" kind of indication that what you're reading really isn't "news" -- at least, not news published by the paper themselves anyway. But if you HAVE to include something like the writer included... the very WORST thing he could have done is to put down that the copyright (c) was from 1997. That's was ages ago! People want to read "news", not "olds". This is a HUGE red flag that's screaming "OLD ADVERTISEMENT RUNNING OVER AGAIN." If you HAVE to put that disclosure in, your response is going to be MUCH higher, changing "some-thing" in the text so you can modify that copyright date to read "(c) current year". See, there are dozens of little things like this you must consider when you're putting a display ad together. Missing one of them may or may not sink you, but missing all of them, unless you're in a rabid marketplace with an amazing offer, surely will. Now go sell something, Craig Garber http://www.KingOfCopy.com P.S. Check out all the prior archives you've been missing, right here at: http://www.kingofcopy.com/tips/tiparchives.html About The Author: Craig Garber is America's Top Direct-Response Copywriter. Uncover hundreds of FREE controversial direct-response copywriting and marketing tips that dramatically boost your sales and your response rates, right here: http://www.kingofcopy.com Article Source: http://www.articlealley.com/http://craiggarber.articlealley.com/which-one-of-these-quotincidentalquot-yet-saleskilling-mistakes-are-you-making-in-your-sales-co-17871.html Text Which One Of These "Incidental" Yet Sales-Killing Mistakes Are You Making In Your Sales Co Author: Craig Garber Today I want to talk about something that was in our original mock ad that may seem incidental, but the way it was handled, is GUARANTE-ED to lower your response. You can check out that original ad, and even print out a copy of it, right here: http://www.kingofcopy.com/tips/real_estate_ad_071505.htm At the bottom of the ad, there was a sort of "disclosure" that said "This report is courtesy of Peter Butera, ReMax ACR. Not intended to solicit properties currently listed for sale. Copyright © 1997." First of all, if you can get away without having any kind of disclosure, than by all means, don't put one in. Sometimes though, the newspaper requires you to include them because they want to have "some" kind of indication that what you're reading really isn't "news" -- at least, not news published by the paper themselves anyway. But if you HAVE to include something like the writer included... the very WORST thing he could have done is to put down that the copyright (c) was from 1997. That's was ages ago! People want to read "news", not "olds". This is a HUGE red flag that's screaming "OLD ADVERTISEMENT RUNNING OVER AGAIN." If you HAVE to put that disclosure in, your response is going to be MUCH higher, changing "some-thing" in the text so you can modify that copyright date to read "(c) current year". See, there are dozens of little things like this you must consider when you're putting a display ad together. Missing one of them may or may not sink you, but missing all of them, unless you're in a rabid marketplace with an amazing offer, surely will. Now go sell something, Craig Garber http://www.KingOfCopy.com P.S. Check out all the prior archives you've been missing, right here at: http://www.kingofcopy.com/tips/tiparchives.html About The Author: Craig Garber is America's Top Direct-Response Copywriter. Uncover hundreds of FREE controversial direct-response copywriting and marketing tips that dramatically boost your sales and your response rates, right here: http://www.kingofcopy.com Article Source: http://www.articlealley.com/http://craiggarber.articlealley.com/which-one-of-these-quotincidentalquot-yet-saleskilling-mistakes-are-you-making-in-your-sales-co-17871.html About the Author: Article Title: Article Keywords: return to article Author by Craig Garber ads similar articles Search Engine Optimization - How to Improve Your RankingCopyright 2005 Kinesis, Inc. Rankings, Rankings, Rankings! How do you get your website ranked well by the search engines? Well, it isn't as hard as you think, but it may not be as simple either. It takes patience and an ongoing commitment to making ......How Stay at Home Moms and Dads Can Generate a Second IncomeCopyright 2005 strength-training-woman.com "I believe wholeheartedly in the importance of being a Mom who chooses not to work outside the home in order to be available for my children. However, I also have experienced the effects of a single income and......Buying wholesale - a few do's and don'ts....Copyright 2005 Richard Grady As most of you know, I have worked with wholesalers both on and offline for many years and a number of my websites are based around helping people find and trade with wholesale suppliers. I receive a fairly constant stre......12 Reasons For Using RSS MarketingCopyright 2005 Rok Hrastnik The importance of RSS for marketing can no longer be disputed, but do we really understand all the benefits RSS brings to us as marketers, or really understand why we need to use it to get closer to our customers? WHAT RS......The Right Marketing Tool For YouA marketing tool is something that a business uses to promote its product or service. This can be done through various means. But the main one is advertising (or marketing). A marketing tool can be any of the following: web design, SEO, photos or illu...... Tags E-Marketingmarketplacedozensreal estatered flagdirect responseadvertisementdisclosureresponse copywriteramazing offert news socialize ads
Text Which One Of These "Incidental" Yet Sales-Killing Mistakes Are You Making In Your Sales Co Author: Craig Garber Today I want to talk about something that was in our original mock ad that may seem incidental, but the way it was handled, is GUARANTE-ED to lower your response. You can check out that original ad, and even print out a copy of it, right here: http://www.kingofcopy.com/tips/real_estate_ad_071505.htm At the bottom of the ad, there was a sort of "disclosure" that said "This report is courtesy of Peter Butera, ReMax ACR. Not intended to solicit properties currently listed for sale. Copyright © 1997." First of all, if you can get away without having any kind of disclosure, than by all means, don't put one in. Sometimes though, the newspaper requires you to include them because they want to have "some" kind of indication that what you're reading really isn't "news" -- at least, not news published by the paper themselves anyway. But if you HAVE to include something like the writer included... the very WORST thing he could have done is to put down that the copyright (c) was from 1997. That's was ages ago! People want to read "news", not "olds". This is a HUGE red flag that's screaming "OLD ADVERTISEMENT RUNNING OVER AGAIN." If you HAVE to put that disclosure in, your response is going to be MUCH higher, changing "some-thing" in the text so you can modify that copyright date to read "(c) current year". See, there are dozens of little things like this you must consider when you're putting a display ad together. Missing one of them may or may not sink you, but missing all of them, unless you're in a rabid marketplace with an amazing offer, surely will. Now go sell something, Craig Garber http://www.KingOfCopy.com P.S. Check out all the prior archives you've been missing, right here at: http://www.kingofcopy.com/tips/tiparchives.html About The Author: Craig Garber is America's Top Direct-Response Copywriter. Uncover hundreds of FREE controversial direct-response copywriting and marketing tips that dramatically boost your sales and your response rates, right here: http://www.kingofcopy.com Article Source: http://www.articlealley.com/http://craiggarber.articlealley.com/which-one-of-these-quotincidentalquot-yet-saleskilling-mistakes-are-you-making-in-your-sales-co-17871.html About the Author:
return to article